NaPoWriMo #4

The Midnight Disease

At first she wrote....



  1. "her robe and fell [wholly] into (a) dream."

  2. It's more than 2 syllables, but I think 'lucidly' might work nicely (intimations of lucid dreaming, etc.).
    Also, you might need a semi-colon after 'productive'... but then, I like semi-colons. :)

  3. "head first"?

    I heard "steadily", but 3 syllables

    or how about "dove deeply"or "dove clearly"into a dream

    great images.


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