Friday, April 04, 2008

NaPoWriMo #4

The Midnight Disease


At first she wrote....


*poof*

4 comments:

  1. "her robe and fell [wholly] into (a) dream."

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  2. It's more than 2 syllables, but I think 'lucidly' might work nicely (intimations of lucid dreaming, etc.).
    Also, you might need a semi-colon after 'productive'... but then, I like semi-colons. :)
    -Sara

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  3. "head first"?

    I heard "steadily", but 3 syllables

    or how about "dove deeply"or "dove clearly"into a dream

    great images.

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