"her robe and fell [wholly] into (a) dream."
It's more than 2 syllables, but I think 'lucidly' might work nicely (intimations of lucid dreaming, etc.).Also, you might need a semi-colon after 'productive'... but then, I like semi-colons. :)-Sara
"head first"?I heard "steadily", but 3 syllablesor how about "dove deeply"or "dove clearly"into a dreamgreat images.
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